Erasure poem from a PAUL BLART: MALL COP 2 review (Day 21)

(Day 21 of National Poetry Writing Month.  The prompt today involved taking a piece of text and erasing words and phrases to create a poem.  I’m working with Bilge Ebiri’s review of Paul Blart: Mall Cop 2.)


Nobody                                                                              did it 

                         , but you might

try 


the trick 

with a


 happy ending of                         an illusion.   new wife 

                                 half-assed 


mother    s                              milk truck

baby, 

                look up, 

mopey 

show 


Daddy                               things and           Sin      But 

don’t expect                                          The 


shenanigans                  to 


take              a boy                              

                                             down 

                                                               this time, it’s     sneering                     team 

                             circle                              fucking

  

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